October 20, 2014

How effective are college essays in the admission process?

Dylan Tastet
Staff Writer


The deadline for early decision college applications was October 15, and most college-bound seniors have turned in a few college applications. Some of these kids would sell their soul to get into the college of their choice, and so they tried their hardest to sound unique to colleges through their essays and teacher recommendations. However, how effective are these as application supplements?


This day and age and especially in our area, college applications have become very competitive. In 2014 69 percent of all Apex graduates enrolled in a four year college, while another 23 percent enrolled in a two year college. The large number of applicants has influenced colleges to adopt a more holistic selection process, taking into account extracurricular activities, hobbies, interests, talents and personality. In order to get a better look at these more subtle factors, many colleges rely upon a mandatory essay and/or teacher recommendation requirement.

This may be a good idea on paper, but when put into practice with the massive pool of ultra-competitive applicants the whole system falls apart. The enormous demand this creates on teachers and school counselors for recommendations results in a body of generic, impersonal recommendations. Student essays have similar flaws. According to the National Association for College Admission Counseling’s (NACAC) 2011 State of College Admission report, 25 percent of students who enrolled in college applied to at least seven schools. If prospective college students are forced to write five or six essays each, it is easy for colleges to get the same generic, self-promoting response from the majority of their applicants. To quote animated film The Incredibles: “When everybody’s super, nobody is.”

The essay prompts encourage trite, predictable responses. They often present no clear topic or ask questions that cannot be answered effectively by many high school students. To give an example, on top of the list of essay prompts for U.N.C. Chapel Hill is, “Why do you do what you do?” Asking high school students to explain their choice of clothing is hard enough. Ask them to explain the reasoning behind their existence and colleges are setting themselves up for responses that sound like they came straight from a beauty pageant.

What colleges are really looking for is an incredible, interesting, outstanding student. One with a life story that will make an admissions officer’s heart melt. The reality is, most high school students are fairly typical people. They don’t have an incredible story to tell and haven’t made any life-fulfilling accomplishments yet. This doesn’t mean they don’t deserve to get into the college of their choice. The entire reason people go to college is to gain the credentials and experience it takes to survive in the real world.


Colleges are doing all high school students a great disservice by requiring essays and teacher recommendations that hold no value to the admissions process. This is the time where a high school student’s future is decided. Although colleges may gather a glimpse into a student’s personality through an essay or letter of recommendation, these letters and essays ultimately hinder the admissions process.